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Behind the Mask

in silence my thoughts scramble and ramble
searching for my semblance of peace
long days of darkness as night comes in
growing cold and aching old
frowns etched in permanent place
pain grows and out it flows
trying to relieve the ripping despair
decisions made and just pain was gained
no lasting joy just left in tears
life unfurls left with my aching sadness
smothering sorrows screams inside
smiles hiding tears stains deep within
no long trusting me or you
slowly turning into a mindless fool

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  • ckwriter69
    March 4
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    very sad and heart felt Teresa, keep letting out your emotions.


  • English.Muffin silver member
    February 25

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    Great

    I really like this poem, it runs smoothly as you read it and its easy to be able to associate with the poem. Love your use of words.