Pressurization postulates within my mind;
pounding, pulsating, pummelling,
pushing away sanity.
Implosion incurs mitigation for thoughts;
igniting, invigorating, idolizing,
illogically erasing reason.
Love contests hate for my desires;
convincing, capsizing, captivating,
capitulating its right.
Atrophy becomes my bane;
analyzing, abstaining, adjudicating,
appearing abnormal.
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Feeling eny is like tasting a sweet & sour meal.
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It's all been said.
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Beautiful...
When art meets science and mingle with knowledge, and a highly qualified mind processes their proper application a "Dreaming Green" is poetized; and the English Fine Letters shine.
May Mother-Poet, – the author of this unique Poem, “You”, – keep feeding the humanity of Your mind to nourish the eternity of Your Soul.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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Very well crafted
I like your rascally repetition of radical rambling rhymelessness! *pant* *pant* Very compact and well written. Succinctly captures the generic (and some no so generic) components of envy. I like your consistent use of punctuation. The only part that seemed a little off to me was "appearing abnormal", which after I thought about I decided that the outward display of behavioral changes between the love/hate pole would make you appear abnormal.
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‘dreaming green’ not only green, multicolored, multiform also, constantly changing like in a kaleidoscope. Our soul is it a chameleon ? A deep poem into the abyss inside of us.
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this is a tongue twister for me and i can usually spit them out like eating pie. you have done well and i wish you the best of luck in this contest that you have entered. thank you for sharing this with me today and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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I really enjoyed this piece. So creative. I read it twice and each time I felt the same.Good write
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