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My Knight

I want to fall in love,
for no apparent reason.

I want to be free,
because I'm tired of being lock up.

My emotions are taking over,
and not in a good way.

I haven't fallen in love,
but I've fallen apart.

The emotions that I am feeling,
are depressing.

I want to feel different kinds of emotion,
happiness would be nice.

I feel like screaming,
because my emotions are crazy.

I don't like this feelings,
but I always get stuck in it.

Where's my savior,
my night and shining armor?

I need to be saved from myself,
I need my emotions to change.

But I can't do it by myself,
where are you my knight?

Hear my plead,
and come save me tonight.

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  • Loveberry
    April 5

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    wow- i like your poem alot! it's incredibly relatable to myself and how i feel.. great job!


  • DecorusApparatus
    April 2

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    Curious...
    Feels very reminiscent of something.
    A common subject perhaps, but written in a very clear way.
    Thank you for entering this into my contest.


  • blackfang4318 gold member
    April 2
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    very siteful
    i love it
    and its very different than the other poems
    that i read