"Now you listen here, you curly-haired freak,
listen carefully to me when I speak.
I am not one bit afraid of you, pal,
so don't give me that pitiful howl.
You lily-livered hopeless dude,
I find you just too darn crass and rude.
Growl at me, will you Nancy boy,
I could chew you up like an old toy.
I may not be a big lunk like you,
but I'm happy to show what I can do.
Bring it on - come on take you best shot...
I may be little, but I am tough and I am hot!"
A contest entry
- Gone To The Dogs by JeannieD Hunter.
600 points, ended March 4, 2009, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think, but kindly, please.
Comments
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LOL,You go little dude!! Dynamite does come in small packages! Well done. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Oh wolfie this made me laugh keep doing well
love the rev papa
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Great take on the prompt picture. Can just imagine this happening
The rhyme is easy to roll off the lips for this poem. Thank you for the smile.
Good luck in the contest.
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A very enjoyable and amusing take on the prompt - well done indeed.
Bill
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Excellent take on the prompt
best of luck in the contest
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Great take on the prompt and very well done.
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This poem was sweet, not my genre, but I enjoyed it. Just take note that you have a spelling error in the 3rd line from the bottom 'take you best shot' wich should be your. But further it's quite cute with great flow and nice imagery. I love my pet dutchounds, and my one great dane, and it's exactly the same with them!! Lol. Well great entry, thanx for sharing and goodluck in the contest. BS
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Superb Plus
I love this one. Thanks for the chuckles! Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. -
AWWWWW. Adorable. Love the picture. Light-hearted and fun- such a refreshing break from all the dark and heavy poems. Great write!
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