Crunching on:
hate
left behind by:
envy
your world
tumbles
Author notes
prompt - mothballs of injury
A contest entry
- Quickie Now #21 by amaranthine lover.
400 points, ended February 24, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
"Reading without reflecting is like eating without digesting."
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Very interesting way of expressing anger! Reminds me of grinding teeth and jealousy! Great expression!
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a wonderful poem congratulations on your honor
maralisa
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I like this a lot.
:] Good luck.
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an interesting take on the prompt!
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Great thought for this prompt my friend.
Good luck to you with this one and thanks
for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826 -
i just pictured hate as smarties, like the candy, and yea it just got funny from there, nice write.
whether or not it was intentional i don't know, but i found it whimsical.
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How true! Simple and short, but conveys a big message... All the best
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Love and regards
Kiddy Vijay -
Great take on the prompt. So much in so few words. Bravo!
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this works good for the prompt.
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This makes me think of how a Moth sees themselves. Very nicely done.
Few words yet very impacting. Best of luck!
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I love this. Sounds like me
lol very well written ! Good luck 
♥
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Beautifully done.
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