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The problems that she hides,
her friends don't know at all,
while they think she stands so proud,
she's just trying not to fall.

The yelling and the screaming,
her nightly lullaby,
an abusive father and a tired mother,
it takes all she has not to cry.

Her grades start to slip,
her eyes take on a glaze,
her friends just live around her,
thinking it's just a phase.

She doesn't tell the stories for a reason,
they have such innocent minds,
so while they're out living her life,
she's just trying to not get behind.

Praying to a God she's sure can't hear her,
her cries fall on his deaf ears,
they say he loves everyone,
but she doesn't deserve to be saved she fears.

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hidden secrets once again
i wish they knew

the ending sucks so if anyone wants to help me fix it.....

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  • JulietteArielle
    June 5, 2009
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    wow this poem breaks my heart, cuz i've been there.

  • yes she does deserve to be saved from her fears

    ...for she is an exceptionally beautiful soul who shows extraordinary wisdom, depth, and compassion for one so young, leading me to believe she will accomplish truly great things with her life and make a big difference in the world. lovely write so sad though


  • SaintSorrow
    March 2, 2009
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    This is very heart wrenching, no one shousld have to fall asleep to cryying and screaming.

    • nobodys-girl
      March 4, 2009
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      thanks for your comment =]
      and your right, but im hoping things change soon

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