Took it to the trash a time or two. . .
always retrieved it, covered in dew.
It was the puppy's bed when he came,
burrowed right in before he had a name.
He's gone to the Rainbow Bridge now,
where coats, I fear, they do not allow.
Before that it was my gardening gear,
a buddy against the cold without peer.
It was the coat I wore in my homelessness,
so the poor thing has known stress and duress.
It came from a charity who helped the lost,
but I would not give it up for any pretty cost.
Who knows who wore it before it became mine?
Maybe it was dear in a better and richer time.
But like old women who toil to survive,
this old coat has a place in keeping me alive.
A contest entry
- This Old Coat... For The Poetic Bandits Group only... by Melodies.
750 points, ended March 1, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think, but kindly, please.
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This is a wonderful response to the contest prompt, you share with the reader the charm and history of this trusted and true friend that has been with you through hard times. Thanks for sharing this thoughtful poem.
Brother Dennis
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Material with specific functions personified almost like a pet. Very interesting.
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good luck in the contest with this very descriptive write that tells a story about a simple everyday item of clothing yet you have turned it into an emotional read
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the most simple of objects turned into poetry. This speaks well of your talent and skill. Very well written.
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I Like It
Reminds me of my old Air Force field jacket.It was a very good friend for a long time.I sure do miss it.I have long hair and a beard now and looking for another field jacket.(reverting back to my childhood) -
How wonderful, the warmth shines forth out of this piece. How gently you have treated this, just like the beloved coat. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.
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Wonderfully executed! Amazing how the simplest of objects hold such great warmth in them!! This piece of poetry depicts how little things in life bring contentment to us in the greatest ways!! A very satisfying read!! The theme is brilliant, and you have done justice to it with a nice choice of words! Way to go.........
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I like this
I find it impressive how you can empty your thoughts about a personal object in your poetry. this is something I have been working on. I am impressed how the old coat tells the storey of a life of use. The poem helps me picture it.
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A wonderful read
your words provoke strong images, they have depth and clarity.
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How precious is that old coat!
Aye, can it be that the history that worked its way into the fabric of that old coat is somehow beneficial in keeping the wearer alive?
A particularly appealing idea that gives me chills. 
Thank you for sharing your inspiration! 
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