Is it you?
Don't you remember darling...
the way we used to be ?
When you said you loved me ... underneath the tree.
while our masters talked ... you and I had that walk.
No ! your scaring me!
Author notes
Photo - this is so cute - this was the first thing I thought of ...thank you for the contest.
Photo from: funnydogsite.com
A contest entry
- Gone To The Dogs by JeannieD Hunter.
600 points, ended March 4, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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soooo cute!!!!!!!!!!
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Very creative... it reveals a touch of sadness.
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Now this I really like. Great work on the prompt
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Thank you it was a fun Prompt
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lol...goes down well with the picture...Congrats on the trophy...
There is a smooth flow to it..
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Thank you for your kind comment
this was a fun write and a fun contest
thank you for reading me.
You are always welcome here.
cher -
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you are very welcome..an enoyable read!
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lmao brilliant light peace big smiles on my dial
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Thank you kind friend for reading and commenting
Glenn-
I'm glad you enjoyed this one - it was my first impression.
just alot of fun these types of contests.
Have a Great Day
Your Friend,
Cheryl
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LOL Yup, this suits the picture well, and just like a man not to remember! Great take on the prompt. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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I had fun with this prompt!
It just seemed to write it's self.
Thank you again,
Sincerely,
Cheryl
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Great take on the prompt
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Thank you
I'm glad you liked it, thank you for reading me.
Sincerely,
Cheryl
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Great take on the picture prompt As I read your lines cant help but seeing the look of horror in those eyes. Nicely penned. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for the compliment
Thank you for taking time to read and comment on me ...sincerely, Cheryl
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This is great. You captured the spirit of the prompt perfectly. Great job. I like the style you use in your poems.
Mike
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Thank you Mike...
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I am never sure what the judges are looking for - I just go with my first impression. Something I have learned from you.
Thank you for reading me and commenting - so few people bother to.
It means alot to me.
Best regards, Cheryl
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