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Night's Power

Missing image
You give me your life,
my willing companion.
The velvet crimson runs
from the wounds I've created
upon your porcelain skin.
I look on at you in wonder
as you recover from the ecstasy
of the feed, and feel the passion
from within.
You're mine for every night until
your death upon the thorns of
silk roses; I'll never let you go.
My property doesn't leave my side
as long as I own the night.

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  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 25
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    Ooo, this is sensual and inviting. Filled with passion, but also a bit controlling. I loved!

  • A-muse-in-writer
    February 25
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    Grins, love the vampire poem, you write them so well Katie, keep it up.