Its time to gather up my things and say goodbye!
for you are no longer intrested in the likes of I!
Though its hard I must fight through
I have to convince myself Im over you
Love once meant something but now its lossed
You had my heart and now over your shoulder its ravenesly tossed!
I thought I meant something to you but now its time to move on
I have to realize that your not here anymore and our love is gone.
I've cried my tears but now its time to wipe them away.
Youre not worth my time or even my day!
I see were over and now its fine with me,
For I've realized that Ill make it by without you easily!
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ravenesly
A contest entry
- ~ Shattered Heart? -- Time to Pick up the Pieces!! ~ by Still Standing.
2000 points, ended June 22, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do u think??
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I LUV'D IT
I THINK IT WILL DO GOOD IN THE CONTEST TOO
ONLY I CAN SAY IS WOW !
-rEMIX fACTROY-
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thanks
thanks for the luck!
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I agree
I do appreciate the images this provides and the rhyme so I will keep this entry but please re-read and fix some of the grammer mistakes because they take away from the great write this could be. Also try adding some more depth to it! This has the potential to be special! 
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Wish I could do that..... Great write well written
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thanks
thanks for the comment
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love I meant something to your but now its time to move on I have to realize that your not here anymore and our love it gone.
i really struggled over that stanza. i meant something to your just looses me for some reason.
i wish you well in this contest that we both have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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