You rude judge
You would place your favorites just because of a little nudge
not fair!
It's like I'm talking to air
why did i enter if I didn't have a chance?
You probably didnt even take a glance
It's an awful thing to do
I hope you're happy YOU!
A contest entry
- Vent your Frustrations. by Loki.
700 points, ended March 1, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was off the original concept of the contest I see. Short, sweet, and sour. Beautiful, if I must say so myself. I liked the fact that it rhymed but the ending was a little, confusing. Of course that could be just my present state of mind. Thank you for entering and best of luck.
-Løki
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