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My Heart






It beats, skips, jumps, pumps-- resonating,
thrums like harps in golden clouds, rains
so sweet inside my mouth; a crimson waterfall.

Strawberry puss.

Juices fizz and tickle those butterflies below--
a well, if you will, echoes fill me up and let me soar.
Oh and if you listen, faint whispers trace your name...

Chocolate veins.

It sings, rings, chimes, rhymes-- radiating
love; reins over treetops and shouts to the world,
"I am no longer in the shadows!"





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  • poetmaster32
    March 1
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    this flows great. good job.


  • Gigglegasm gold member
    February 27

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    Wow. This is beautiful work - such a creative vision of the heart. I think I may love you (as a poet, of course). You're so different, so talented. Just incredible.

    MUST.
    READ.
    MORE.

    PourSugarOnMe


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    February 25

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    great piece. "strawberry puss" wow.

    you definately don't falter into cliche in a write such as this...where most would. what I would expect from you. well written and kept me intrigued througout.

    "strawberry puss" wow...again...lol.