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rest in peace

{rest in peace}

rest in peace
is all I'm saying at the moment
people I love
dropping like flies
and why should they get to rest in peace
while the rest of us fight on?

{I dont mean it.
I miss you}

fighting back with all your strength
and winning.
false hope
for months later
its back, stronger, angrier
and you loose;
the battle and the war

{why'd you have to go?}

free from the pain
anger, hate
gone for less than an hour
and there fighning again
bet your glad your out the firing line, eh?

{I don't mean it
I miss you}

Author notes

crap poem, crap mood.

first my uncle rodney and now my future brother in laws step-mother sue. R.I.P

Things happen in 3s so I'm waiting for the next death, maybe my gran who has fluid on her lungs or my mum and her heart problems or maybe someone will get run over

erugh someone distract me please. I dont want to imagine the deaths of my family and friends...

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  • MasterFoxFang
    March 28

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    OK

    it will be ok you will heal and not crap poem i like this one alot keep on writing may i call you homie that's what i call my friends.

  • I am so so sorry. I hope that things can get better for you, and I hope to God that things do not happen in threes.
    It was an excellent write


    • glitterydoom
      February 25
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      thankyou for your comment, but it seems they do happen in threes as my gran is in hospital, they think she may have had a heartattack -sighs-


  • xkadiex
    February 25
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    aww bambi huni why didnt you tell me? and i think that death also comes in threes....did i tell you that? anyway babe, im here you know stuff whats happened and i can listen, and im here for you....and your poem aint crap, and fabulous, i loved it babe hug* and for me babes.