Blow the coals
of a fire once strong ~
stir from mere embers
life renewed...
Free your phoenix,
letting it soar!
Author notes
Prompt: agitate
20 Words
Note:
"blow the coals" & "stir" are syns for agitate.
A contest entry
- Quickie-type thingermajigger 10-20 by helios.
575 points, ended February 25, 2009, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This seems to be about passion. thats what i got from it. let nothing bridle your passions. excellent write. keep up the great job
-deadly
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Not bad at all! From a critical standpoint [I know right, who likes those], I've seen muchhh better from you. Just my opinion though :].
Nice work, and good luck in the contest!
:]
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very short and very powerful. thank you for sharing this with me today. i wish you well in this contest that you have entered and am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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Soar above the rest, beautiful take on the prompt.
Best of luck to you
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a wonderful poem I liked this good luck in the contest
maralisa
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I love this one, you did a great job
with it my friend! I wish you all the best
in this contest and thanks for sharing it!
Jeremy0826
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