She was a warrior
like nothing anyone
had ever seen before.
For she would hunt
with the full moon,
the sun or even when
the rays of the sun
would glisten off
the fresh covering of snow.
From the tundra to the
desert, she has hunted
the wild cats for their fur.
Only the cheetah, which
is both shy and sleek
has escape being caught by her.
Her inner need to
kill this beast had
become an inferno,
a burning desire to win.
The day she caught it
she was singing to herself
that this time the cat
would be hers.
"Ye little shy beast
will be mine,
I will not be lost
in the mirror of your eyes."
She captured .. but not
killed the beast that
had elude her..
she tamed the beast instead.
Author notes
Word Bank:
glistening [glisten], mine, lost
warrior, tundra
singing, mirror, eyes,
shy, cheetah
sleek, inferno,
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Aww that was cute
Like everyone else, I really adore your ending!!! It's so sweet! If I hadn't seen the contest before, the wordbank would've surprised me cuz it seemed so natural.
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Being a animal lover, I was happily surprised at how this ended. Very well written.
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This was great! I wasn't even sure if you had used the word bank myself, since it flowed so well. I love the twist at the end; it softened the poem and resolved the building tension very nicely. Excellent write, and thanks for entering!
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shivers
well done my friend
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I wouldn't have guessed that this was a wordbank, from reading it, until I read your notes. You owned this wordbank. I loved your fantasy and imagery in this.
Beautiful!
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I loved the ending; this is an incredible write.
Good luck in the contest.
Lady D
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