We stay close
With all the sign you leave for me.
There are more monents I find
The comfort of thee.
Not yet face to face,
I know where to find you in our place.
We stay close
I know You know I need you.
I wait till there is often an over load.
You are ther with open arms and a soothing voice
That draws ont so close one can feel you near.
I know where to find you in our place.
We stay close
When a friend is in need.
I tell them the comforts of you.
I mention them to you.
Why is it them more often than me.
Because i know where to find you in our place.
A contest entry
- yet... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended March 10, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Gongratulations on your HM for your wonderful poem.
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Tender and intimate portrayal of that closeness you have only uniquely to yourself, you and Him.....and sharing about Him to others...Love your form, and flow......From the heart!
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Stay close always. Well done Sheila
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So warm and so hopeful work showing the depth of the soul of a poet..and the universal thought around the words...love it..well done..
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this piece really speaks to me, it's very subtle in it's message, but it's message is still so strong, there is just something about this piece that really makes me think about my own beliefs, great work, best of luck in the contest
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This is good almost like a place to find comfort from a friend great job!
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Beautiful Poem
So very heartfelt Mac. This bne touches the heart. Friends are as treasure to be cherished. And God is always there for us when we need Him most. He is the best Father anyone could have. Always here for my sweet friend. Hugs and Smiles.
God Bless You,
Sandy
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