Even though my eyes
Have not physically seen your face
I have seen you so many times
And basked in your wonderful grace
I see you in every flower
Also in every tree
I see you in the bright blue sky
In the wind that blows so free
Dear Heavenly Father I see you
I hear your every word
In every note the birds do sing
Your voice now reassures
My Savior and My God
Your voice is ever sweet
I shall listen patiently
Until face to face we meet
A contest entry
- yet... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended March 10, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is full of His grace and
beauty. His love just pours out into everyone's heart. Thank-you for this insperation for the day...mac -
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Thank you mac. Your comments are always appreciated. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
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Amen indeed..this is indeed a very deep surrender to the GOD and to make HIM to know that how desperate you are to face HIM as well..thanks for sharing..
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I somehow missed this message from you on the 13th. Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind comment.
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A beautiful write of personal faith that lifts the heart of the reader along with you.
Sheila
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Thank you LittleMoon for your comment on my poem. It is greatly appreciated.
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I love the innocence part of the statement made in the poetic wonders here..love the message and my thanks for the beautiful poetry for the contest..
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Lovely verse full of meaning - I especially like verses 1 & 2. Good use of rhyme - I like the partial rhyme in verse 3 of 'word' and 'reassures'. I can relate to the thoughts you've expressed about the many ways that we 'see' God in his creation and the way he speaks to us when we listen. I like the first and last lines that open and conclude the poem well.
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Thank you harriet567 for reading and commenting on my poem. Your comment on my poem is greatly appreciated.
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Good luck in the contest. Your words are beautiful and heartfelt. I really enjoyed reading this poem.
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Thank you Blue30 for reading my poem and commenting on it.
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very heartfelt and loving. well done.
My Savior and My God
Your voice is ever sweet
I shall listen patiently
Until face to face we meet
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Thank you couldbeworse. Your comment is very much appreciated.
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Simply lovely
A wonderfully touching poem. well written and flows beautifully.
Good luck in the contest, I think you may be onto a winner with this one.
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Thank you Epd for your kind comment. It is greatly appreciated.
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this piece almost feels like it could be a prayer, like something you would say before you go to bed to keep you safe, it's so pretty, best of luck in the contest
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Thank you dustytiger for reading and commenting on my poem.
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"I see you in every flower
Also in every tree
I see you in the bright blue sky
In the wind that blows so free"
beautiful thought on omnipotent God
katie! i love your verse very close to my heart
All the best to you!!
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Thank you Purush for your kind comment. So glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
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AWW This poem is so beautiful and hopeful, and lovely. I love how the back ground ties into the words, and I love the hope that comes from every word you write. This is such a beautifully well done poem. Good luck in the contest, but this is a winner already in my mind.
God Bless,
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Thank you larkbird for your kind comment. I am so glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
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What insperation you offer
Most of us need it when ever we can find it. Life seems hardest whe these words are found. Thanks for placing the for one to find...mac -
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Thank you Mac for reading my poem and your kind comment.
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