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I Found Someone New

There was a time
When you were mine
I was your only girl
Who lite your world world

Why things had to go wrong
When my love for you was so strong
In my heart is where you belong
Why didn't we get along

Now I had to move on
Baby I found someone
His love is true
He is not like you

I feel brand new
Because he love me too
He knows my worth
I'm the one he loved on this earth

You thought she was hot
But now she's all you got
I know when you touch her it's not the same
But you cannot come back it would be a shame

I got appreciation
I'm his admiration
Drunken with my intoxication
Our love is a strong foundation

You threw my love away
But someone found it another day
Now there is nothing you can say
Cause my love life is okay

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  • beautiful write congratulations on HM


  • hawkeslake gold member
    February 24

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    First, your background doesn't let us see your name. But the poem is definitely an "in your face" piece, and I can see why it felt good to write this one down. Glad you have someone new!


  • Riftkin gold member
    February 24

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    Seems like you are doing okay now, and you just
    had to let the other person know that you are
    now doing okay without them in your life.

    Thank you for entering.

    Riftkin