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Canticle




Dappled

pavement is a lake


For flock of white ibis,

mockingbird serenades


Sunrise service;

aubade.




Author notes


“I give thanks to You, living and everlasting King,
for you have returned my soul to me with compassion.
Great is your faithfulness.”

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  • Emmyb gold member
    April 9, 2009

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    incredible language. beautiful images. lovely wording and not typical or cliche at all. well done. a great little achievement. Emm


  • Sandygram silver member
    February 25, 2009

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    You have pened a very beautiful poem. Lovely imagery. A pleasure to read this morning. Take care, Sandy


  • BellaAmare
    February 24, 2009
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    Very poetic.