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Fireflies stanza 2

Joyful as unchained stars
Disney reality on a twilight screen
Erratic diamonds on velvet
Bright escaping dreams

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MANINBLACK

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  • Xx-Erin-xX
    March 5

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    Great write! I love it. I like your descriptions: "Joyful as unchained stars", "Disney reality on a twilight screen", "Erratic diamond on velvet".

    Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • hamid
    February 24
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    A short simple but fantastic poetry.
    Lovely to read