Cross stitching silks
threading together,
Images visual,
building pictures,
spread upon canvas,
tying up loose ends..
Author notes
pulling through
no more than 30 words ( 16 words )
In a list
A contest entry
- pulling through by going nowhere.
700 points, ended February 24, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice one. And thanks for the comment on my page. I think maybe SOME of my wishes will come true;-)....
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love it
love the way it twists in with the reality and almost the theraputical sense of the actual distraction
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We all need to muster courage and get outof stuff sometimes..lovely imagery here! Congrats on gold!
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Nice and short.
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Excellent
what a great write. So deserving of the gold.
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Great stuff!!!
Less is more...
So much expressed in so few words...
Fantastic vivid imagery that made for a compelling read & so worthy of the gold you be sporting there...
Another outstanding piece...
Well done!!!
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Awesome!
beautiful imagery, I never thought of cross stitching in this way... very clever. Congrats on the Gold. Well deserved!
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Thank you
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Beautiful imagery and metaphor...it is such a wonderful weaving of words to life...nicely done.
Congrat's on the well deserved Gold.
Love,
mystic
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what a GREAT image.. even moreso the second read through when it really hit me... pulling through those threads, x-ing the image in our mind and making that picture of tying up loose ends and moving forward... great job!
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Thank you so much for honoring me with Gold x
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This is what life is all about
We are the canvas and what we make of life is what we have to show...mac -
This is what life is all about
We are the canvas and what we make of life is what we have to show...mac -
This is what life is all about
We are the canvas and what we make of life is what we have to show...mac
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This is a wonderful usage of sixteen words sissy. I love the imagery. And the background is beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
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This paints a cross stitch picture to me, as one starts out with a blank canvas and builds on it with the very thin threads and pulling them through.
Best of luck to you with this.
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aw a very beautiful poem I love your imagery and depth throughout my freind good luck in the contest my freind take care
maralisa
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