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Where do

Where do whispers  come from
the darkness
they are echoes
of thoughts and feelings
in which we are afraid to speak
about aloud.

Where do tears come from
our fears.
they are truths

in which we cannot face
cannot yet acknowledge

Where do you go

when the stars come out

and a million

billion lights

are strewn across

the welcoming sky.

 

I go to

be with you

in the here

and the now.

 

 

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  • The-namesless-one
    March 3, 2009

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    Wow, I love this. It's powerful. I can't quite get a clear mental image, but it really made me think.


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    March 1, 2009

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    I like this as I have everything I've read of yours but I just have to ask..is "ski" supposed to be "sky"? I may be totally off or you may have meant it that way.

    Anyway...

    Great write!


    • trekkergirl
      March 1, 2009
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      you know come to think of it.... I think you might be right I was thinking that that word spelled right but that's actually the wrong work... I think it should be sky... thanks for pointing that out. I appreciate it. I will change it.


  • toomysterious
    February 25, 2009
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    Good but not your best. It seemed to sidetrack, lose focus or meaning, at least, for me.


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    February 25, 2009

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    Hummz, but not of your Standard, you usaully write alot lovely
    it's a bit off
    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


    • trekkergirl
      February 25, 2009
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      yeah I know didn't quite sound right to me either... but for some reason I just couldn't get it the way I wanted. And well, everyone I showed it to said they liked it... but me... I still think it is missing something.


  • Spiritual Soul
    February 24, 2009

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    wow this is beautiful I love it. I think I loved every part, nothing stuck out to me, the whole piece did! Amazing write. Good luck in the contest!!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~

    • trekkergirl
      February 25, 2009
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      thanks for the comment. Glad that you liked it.


    • trekkergirl
      February 24, 2009
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      thank you for this wonderful comment. I really do appreciate people like you who take time out of their busy day to comment telling me who they like my work. It makes my day to read a nice comment like yours.


  • couldbeworse
    February 24, 2009

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    Where do tears come from
    our fears.
    they are truths that

    in which we cannot face
    cannot yet acknowledge

    loved that part!!! great write.


    • trekkergirl
      February 24, 2009
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      thanks for commenting. I am so glad that I have someone like you to read my work... YOu make my day with us wonderful comments. SMILE


  • August Starlight gold member
    February 24, 2009

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    That's quite breathtakingly beautiful.
    I enjoyed it, amazing write.
    Thank you for sharing it with us.


    • trekkergirl
      February 24, 2009
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      thank you for taking the time out for commenting...it is people like you who make my writings so special to me. Thanks again


  • untouched pages
    February 24, 2009

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    I found this write to pull me and keep me at the edge of my seat... It wasn't jam packed with imagery, but there was so many underling means for things that I was in my glory.. This is another wonderful write my dear... Keep up the great penning!!

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