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If you were the moon

Perfection
is what we
never were
And still
I wish for you
As if you were
the moon
that lights the night
as if you were
the star
that lights the sky.
I'm not
sure how
to run from you
or how
to turn away
I know I can not
reach for you
for fear of
holding on.






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  • fantasysmurf
    February 24

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    Haunting

    The thoughts you bring here, visit us at nightime (star and moon). To be attracted and frightened at the same time brings a haunted theme, like somebody's ghost in your mind. Good work penning down the philosophy and reflections of a human mind, Shortyjo.


  • A TaStE oF rEaLiTy
    February 24
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    truly understanding this piece...im in that situation as we speak good work


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 24
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    Beautifully sad with some great emotions
    here. Lovely work here my friend!




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