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Are You Busy?

Are you busy? She asked,
Leaning on the doorframe,
I mean can you spare a
Moment of your time? You
See my husband’s away
And I seem to have blocked

The sink and I wondered if
You would be able to…
She paused and gave a small
Smile and opened her eyes
Wide and the young man from
Upstairs on his way out

Stood opened mouthed and gazed
At the woman whose dress
And look and beautiful
Eyes took away his breath
And took him by surprise.
I mean if you haven’t

Time I’ll understand, she
Said, leaning her head to
One side, then nodding back
Behind her, and it won’t
Take long, and I will be
Ever so grateful, and

The young man closed his mouth,
Stared at the fine figure
Of the woman, but then
Remembered the rumours
He’d heard and took flight like
Some frigid frightened bird.

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    February 26, 2009

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    great piece here.

    "remembered the rumours
    He'd heard and took flight like
    some frigid frightened bird."

    most not have been very good rumors ...lol. :P

     


    • Terry Collett
      February 26, 2009
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      Thank you, Catie.

      Just came to me and I was quite ready to stay but she closed the door in my 61 year old face.LOl.


  • geckogirl
    February 24, 2009
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    mmm I need a handy man like this


    • Terry Collett
      February 24, 2009
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      Thank you.

      One of lighter poems and I sure need them sometimes to give relief from the dark one. Thank you.