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~more randomness~

the dings and dents
of colliding colloquialism
falls short of shouts
from candescent charge-

albescent alloys rain
stressing syllables
erasing erudite throngs
of dynamic dialogues

threaten the throttled
body of my intake manifold
careful not to choke-

sooty steel corrodes
the faint of foreign
makings, destined
to distress the upholstery
under the swelter
of sticky candy hearts
and tobacco stains-

just millimeters of
rubber tread, carry
cries of blown balloons

popped...
  blipped...

stalled suddenly, before
breathtaking exhale

through the tail pipe

of misfortune's murmurs.

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-Just more randomness.

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  • DarkPrince
    February 24

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    wow....lovely piece sis .. as all of urs are princess
    i cant believe its humble me who shared in inspiring u to write this beauty .. ur great vocabulary really knows how to serve the focused imagery in the poem


  • maralisa silver member
    February 24

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    a wonderful write with some wonderful imagery and depth throughout thank you for sharingmaralisa