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#20 A Prayer; God on high.

Yes He has heard your call
Yes He has seen you Crawl.

When Paul had called, He had seen as much pain
When Peter called, He had Seen the Rain and was Feign.

But you, Dear child, are Calling for him Out of Glee.
From your heart, Both pure and free, has he seen you balling.
And By his Grace you are now sprawling!

My friend he asks only this,
Be true to your word in Christ alone
And be Sustained and spiced, on his works enticed
For He Sits on his throne, Holy and Almighty.
Christ be with you, wholly and mighty!


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  • HisPrincessMaloka
    February 24

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    Yay Zigon! Here's your prompt: 20. Pick one of my poems and write a response to it. MAKE SURE TO TELL ME WHICH POEM YOU CHOSE! (I made a contest for this a while back and it got so confusing because I have 400+ poems, so make sure I know)