Many men and women
View Valentines day
As their special day of love.
The love can be seen
Between them as a glow
With the smiles of their unity.
The way they can't keep
Their love for each other
From escaping to the air above.
The love they have for each other
Is about more than just one day
It's about today and all eternity.
When God brings together
The ones he meant for each other
It is as perfect as a pure white dove.
Author notes
option one #5 valentines day
A contest entry
- February New Members Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended March 4, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Welcome to Allpoetry
hello james,
I think that you did a pretty good job with this, though I was confused as to a real solid defining moment...
Criss
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welcome to allpoetry
This is a sweet poem that brings a smile to my face. Good imagery, well written. Please put your prompt number in the author's notes per the contest rules.
♥
Shawna
Site Greeter
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welcome to allpoetry
Sweet words of love... you have some good lines written here. Though it is obvious which option you have used here you will still need to put that number in your any notes? section (in edit). If you have any questions just let us know.
Good luck to you and enjoy the site.
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Welcome to Allpoetry
This is another beautiful write.. with soo much love woven in these simple lines.
A small correction would be: your lines though they say so much individually, it seems a little broken when put togther. Kindly revise on that to make this all the more awesome.. Good luck to you in everything..
Thanks..
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