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Please

Finger shaped bruises
Start to form into my wrists
As you hold me down.
It feels like you are crushing me to the bone.

Already I am throbbing.
Already I ache
And you know it.
You will never forget how easily you can make me bend.

A wicked tongue dances along my ear
Causing small whimpers to erupt.
We both know what they really are.
They are vague whisperings of an shameless begging.

You let go of your grip.
I have reached the state where I will not run.
You run your nail along my spine
Causing goosebumps to roll across my flesh.

It would seem kind to an outsider's eyes
But we both know this is only another form of your torture.
You don't always need blood and physical dominance.
Degrading your son pleases your sick mind well enough.

And I play to your games.
I play so I can have a taste of what you have created for me.
You made it feel like heaven
Before my mind could realise it was a hell.

Nails dig into my flesh
And a startling cry bursts into the air.
My hips buck with their own will
While the words I dread escape.

"Please," I cry. "God, please."
Blasphemy in more ways than one.
The god they taught us would not grant my requests.
Only a demon would invoke such taboo.

But you play a demon quite nicely, my father.
With all that I have seen,
You could be the devil himself.
Are you the great Samael?

Samael: poison of God.
Poison of me.
For you have intoxicated me with your ways.
You have made me your druggie.

Am I easier to control now?
Tell me there was at least a purpose for this.
I hate you. I will always hate you.
But I couldn't stand it if you stopped.

You'll never grow tired of hearing that word.
"Please"

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Sequel to my poem, Addiction

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  • Generic Drug silver member
    April 23, 2009
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    *blinks again*

    Amazing.

    And thats all I can say.

  • nightmind
    March 3, 2009

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    arrousing

    i like the tone very much. it matches my own thoughts.
    very well expressed the D/s relation.
    i like the moment wnen you describe the submission.
    the point where it "wont run away" ...


  • zhaniswolf
    February 26, 2009

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    Wow.



    That is all I can say. This was so well written it took me there and when I snapped back to reality, I was rendered speechless. Wonderful.


  • blueyez
    February 25, 2009
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    wowwwww bdsm indeed! I like !


  • MommaFallenAngel gold member
    February 24, 2009
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    I absoutely loved it

    this was really good great job s

  • mmook
    February 24, 2009
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    well done well express .. very touching


  • Shiny.Jumbo.Crayons
    February 24, 2009
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    because translators make it look creepy and weird and they don't know the difference between him and it....

    I love you. You write so well it almost seduces away my heart. I always end up feeling so lost in your words. They engross me so. I almost feel jealous of your talent. I could never write this well.
    One day I will destroy him though... he does not deserve to lick the wax from your ear.


  • Shiny.Jumbo.Crayons
    February 24, 2009

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    Vous écrivez si bien qu'il séduit presque loin mon coeur. Je finis toujours par devenir me sentir si perdu dans vos mots. Ils me captivent ainsi. Je me sens presque jaloux de votre talent. Je ne pouvais jamais l'écrire bien.
    Un jour je le détruirai bien que ... il ne mérite pas de lécher la cire de votre oreille.
    Je t'aime, mon rubis.


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