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~February 23, 2009~"Menus of Possibilities"

the refusal of a wine flute,
to let go of chapped stick lips.

peeled orange rind wakes
the mental notes of porous incantation.

citrus blossom fugues,
to rescind the wormwood bitters-

breaks the low somber swing,
to balance and equipoise.

to laugh again at the frog fries,
to relish joy over the deep fried onion.

smother cheddar over melted hopes-
fatten the wallet of a starving mind.

new bread roll baskets on gingham cloth
clicks the bright pen against the table-

steamed java and rice fulfills the need
to string applicant expectations
upon a fresh start of a new day.


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Author notes

-Just some randomness. They are not meant to all be strung together into one poem or to be taken seriously. This is merely an exercise of mine to generate texture,color, life and to generally get my muse working.

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  • SteveS gold member
    August 23, 2009

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    Ooooo, such rich imagery I need to skip dessert. Very well-selected words to translate your poem. You have indeed, generated texture here. How's the muse going?


  • lunarlunacy
    May 3, 2009
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    nice, this appeals to my culinary passions and poetic.


  • storiesuntold
    March 15, 2009
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    Very well done

    It held me the whole way through I would say your muse has been tweeked to perfection indeed


  • Ithica silver member
    March 5, 2009

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    Well I hope your excercise worked to kick start your muse... All this mouthwatering imagery has made me ravenous... and there goes the diet!!! lol!!!


    • Hetha
      March 5, 2009
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      Thankfully, words and phrases have zero calories. I'm glad you enjoyed my work, sweetie

  • piccola
    March 2, 2009

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    somehow I can tell you work or worked in the food industry lol.
    lots of texture and color here. Great job. thanks for entering


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    February 25, 2009

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    the imagery in this is fantastic. thank you for sharing this with me today. i wish you the best of luck, though i do not think you will be needing it, in this contest that we both have entered. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the very near future. viyanna rosemarie


  • maralisa silver member
    February 24, 2009

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    a wonderful poem I love your random thoughts thuoughout your imagery is great thank you for sharingmaralisa

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