I still remember how it all happend
It all went by so fast & quick
with tempers flowing and heartache
nearing all kinds of hurt felt
We were so numb it was as if we could not
feel the pain so faded so saint
we were realy gone that day was it no faith
that god did not see this coming?
I took the gun as a game
But I played & failed, I shot my bestfriend
Im sorry! Im sorry! please come back
wake up! wake up! its just a game
I didn't mean to, open your eyes for I love you
Open your eyes for I need you
Author notes
I had a dream that my best/friend & I were doing drugs and we got in a fight, & I killed her by mistake. I was joking when I took the gun, I did not know it was loaded. How that gun got there is my question?
What did you think?
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Are dreams just wish fulfilment?
If that is the case a very dark poem indeed. A sonnet wrote in couplet form, very expressive.
I liked the tale, love dark poetry, think it gets very close to many truths.
You weave your magical words with
Im sorry! Im sorry! please come back
wake up! wake up! its just a game
With an intents belief, that is scary to the reader.
Hitchcock syle in verse. loved it
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I think thta you wrote this amazingly well. The dream can be the scariest thing on this world. The fact that you were able to write this...it is really amazing. That is all i am able to say. Really good.
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here is some dream interpretation information
Gun
To see a gun in your dream, symbolizes aggression, anger, and potential danger. You may be dealing with issues of passiveness/aggressiveness and authority/dependence...there is more to this, but just google dream interpretation....
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I've been reading dream books recently.. mostly because I'm laying awake all night bored. But it might be a good idea to look it up somewhere, dreams seem to have weird interpretations. But great write.
"I took the gun as a game "
I love that line, perfect.
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Well I don't know how to interpret dreams, so I can't answer that question, unless deep down you were mad with your friend about something and had brushed it off, for it to resurface in a dream
An interesting write. Thank you for sharing.
Gaylene
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