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By Chance


Sweet addiction
finally surrenders...

evolving

rhythmically

together

solidifying
a chance connection

against the odds,
interlocking opposites
grow deeper
than forever...


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  • bulletimperio
    February 25

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    how 'bout "sweet surrender"?...hehe...wish I can go deeper as much as I want to but I guess I need to warm up first, hahaha...but you've been very good as always my dear ate Mo!!! Mwah!!!