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Dream the Dream

Christy and Bryan
they were sighin'
staring into each other's eyes

They were madly in love
he was sent from above
fitting perfectly into each other's lives

Their hands were a match
their hearts were latched
they vowed to each other till the end

Kissing and hugging
always loving
he was her best friend

She dreams of the day
he wishes to say
he wants her forever as his wife

But until he asks
they'll lay in the grass
and dream the dreams of life






Author notes

I love bryan so much and i havent done a happy little poem in a while so i figured a cute little one was due

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  • trilobite23
    March 20

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    I love you

    I love you so much baby I'm glad you express yourself like this its absolutely beautiful. I'm sorry I haven't commented on your poems as much in the past but I wanna start doing it more often. I really do love them so much. You are a true artist to be able to paint our love in a such a way that it makes my heart skip a beat and sends me floating away. I love you and always will I can't wait to see you again.