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Our ritual

I hear the rain...
Falling lightly on the window
I know that you will be waiting

For me to come outside
Walking down the stairs
I'm wondering

What you'll do this
Time around
Will you

"Kidnapp" me
Or will it be
The silk again

As I walk out
The front door..
I see you there

Your naked body
Shown proudly
To the world

A smile comes to
My face thinking
That even a God would

Be sinly jelous

I walk over
My body also
Shown to the world

You grab me ruffly
Throwing me to the ground
Screaming "On your knees"

I obey...

And slowly move
To my knees
My thighs

Wet with my juices

You move my legs
Wider apart...
Then with suprise

Spear me
With your length....

I cry out
From shock
And pleasure

With each thrust
You move faster and faster
The water cascading

Down our bodies
Pooling at my knees
The thunder

Drounding out
My moans
Of joy

When I feel
Like I'll break
If I don't cum...

You tell me it's ok
And we go over
Together

One body....

Because

This is
Our ritual

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  • my contest really has nothing to do with erotica, but this is very good, keep writing!


  • Flight of Dragons
    February 25
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    Whew!

    Very graphic but insanely good.


  • GoodbyeFarewell
    February 24
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    wow

    i really like this alot great job amazing write keep up the good work i love it in the beginning to the middle till the end it made me want to read it over and over again yet again great job love it keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day