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Granspa's Two Men

Well Keelan what do you know.
Your mom and give us another new man.
One for each side of me
One to sit on each knee.

What a time we will have
All the place we cam visit again
Showing your brother Eli
Where all we have been

You can tell him the fun we had
We will take him and be glad.
The more the merrier, it is said
We are making a troop out of us you know

Look at all who stop as we go
Man and men, we are the three.
Where ever we go taking in the scenes
But we can always make room for one more-one day.

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  • honey bear
    February 24

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    good luck in the contest with this very sweet write, i like the way yo uhave taken the view of the granfather


  • Jesann gold member
    February 24

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    Ahhh, this is nice..written from the perspective of the Grandpa !!!
    Love the lines...
    "One for each side of me
    One to sit on each knee"
    A wonderful write.
    Thank you for your entry.