“Press it again.
Listen.”
“There it goes.
You looking?”
“Yeah…..You?
Where does it go?”
“ A mystree of life.
What you think?”
“He keeps talking
about that brown dog
barking at the back door.”
“Then disappears in here
aint nothing special
not a dog in sight.”
‘Press it again.”
“No you.”
“It’s your turn.”
“I’m just looking.”
Author notes
Made it back in time did not think I would....
A contest entry
- Looking For Laughs by JeannieD Hunter.
600 points, ended February 24, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well done. Congratulations on the silver. -
LOL I love this!! Heehee, "I'm just looking" LOL, too good! Awesome take on the picture. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Its.............
My first impression is ..................................
I dont under stand it.
I'm sorry but thats how I feel, Maybe you can explain it to me at a later time. -
funny and cute
This is such a realistic conversation between these 2 cats.
It sure made me laugh!
They really are mischievous creatures.
Good luck in this contest!
Jeannette
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Excellent
Oh my what a great take on the picture. Best of luck in the contest.
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Hahahaha You are to funny and so is this Brown dog at the back door. That's so precious I know that dog too
Best wishes in the contest hun. Hilarious!
Gaylene
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