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soap briety





She was naked,
but never vulnerable
with her almond eyes.

They had that delectable
blade,
that severs you in two.

I breathed her in,
with the hypocrisies
of the rose,
when I was naked

and vulnerable.
 
Did I mention
sober?







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  • zochit2me gold member
    February 25

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    You da man Muddy...you da man

    Vulnerable or not...

    I love this!

    ♥Becky♥


  • charcoal
    February 24
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    poetry

  • Rowan gold member
    February 24

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    sober's best at times like this. I love it when a man seems vulnerable, who doesn't? I'm so glad you came to bathe in here.
    Thanks for entering.


  • notorious
    February 24
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    Smaaaaaaaaaart from title to end


  • poet2angels gold member
    February 23
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    sigh~




    You always amaze me

  • Aisades
    February 23

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    You paint women so sexy, intelligent and powerful. I love the vulnerable feel you give yourself in these writes.

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