Thermacolled safely
deep under decisions right,
childhood blooming well
watered life long.
Few numbers on calender
astonish soul,
inner child peeps out
for that fresh air,
before basking in memories
again.
Author notes
Hmm...Been quite a while since I did anything childish...
In a list
A contest entry
- Does the Child within ever grow up... by Sandra R Reynolds.
650 points, ended March 9, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Love this
"inner child peeps out for fresh air" 
The beginning seems deep, but ends on a light note 
Amber
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Glad you like it dear...love the butterfly emoticon too
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In an interview today they asked me what animal I would love to be.. I said a butterfly, because they are free and pretty And that is true! I would be one if I could
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Wow
I love this
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thank you..glad you like it
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Hahaha the child never dies...good entry
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And I feel it souldnt ever...Glad you like it!
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second stanza is fantastic. Though we age child in us always curious.
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glad you like it!
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Love your imagery.
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Thank you!
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This is such a very intriguing piece of thought here, that second stanza set in - leaving reverie to bloom. Nicely penned!
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Thank you so much!
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I like the second stanza especially the line "inner child peeps out for that fresh air..." very good imagery... good luck in the contest
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Thank you very much!
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so cute
inner child peeps out
for that fresh air.
before basking in memories
again.
loved the way you said it dear sister
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Thank you!
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fresh air, memories and.... ice cream!
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lol
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Very cleaver you are with words
We always keep peeping and making changes - for the good...mac -
Very cleaver you are with words
We always keep peeping and making changes - for the good...mac
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thanks dear..hope all turns for the best!
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