When I seek your opinion,
the things that you tell me sound sweet to my ears,
and I know that you have lied to me....
...or is it so?
What about the things that you told me that soured my ears?
as I tried to shut my ears to the information that my brain tried to perceive?
.....so is that the truth?
What about the times you say things to calm my heart,
Those words which are said you never intended....
as each truth unfolds a lie,
the lie is in fact the truth,
and after a hurricane,
the silence that rules,
I realize that I am free.
Author notes
This poem is on the spot, lol. Lessee how I did against others 
A contest entry
- Are you a liar? by laurel.
550 points, ended March 10, 2009, 14 entries
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Comments
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Nicely expressed.
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you ended this poem very well =)
Good luck in the contest -
nice
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me likey!
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