Fragrance of summer rain fall softly,
beads on lips, like dew on meadows.
Eyes gaze through falling raindrops,.
love stirs as nature washes the seeds.
Bountiful, nature's cup runneth over.
flows gently amid desire we share.
Trickle off brow, embrace moment.
kiss gently the droplets upon my lips.
Sigh at breathtaking beauty in bloom,
seek such pleasure as the petals open.
Responds, opens, thirst is quenched.
the flower yearns to soak in moisture.
Moist, make me quiver, pull me close,
I surrender to the shelter of your arms.
As rain penetrates waiting garden wall.
flow within as flower thirsts no more.
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This is sensitive and sensational. I have to bookmark. Don't say that lightly. Oh, gorgeous! Thank you. Will read more - promise. Glad to meet you - if only in 'adversity'! x Debs -
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oops... so carried away I forgot to give my best round of applause... hope it was added. x
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Oh my, a very soft sensual piece with breathtaking imagery that dances upon the heart!
Lovely lovely lovely Sandy!!!
Linda
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Good Morning Linda
You make a nice morning even better by stopping by.
Love your comment. So glad you enjoyed my poem. Hugs and Smiles for you deasr friend. Hope all is well there too.
Always, Sandy
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This is such a beautiful romantic poem. It makes me think of my boyfriend, Josh. It puts a smile on my face. You've written yet another amazing poem mom. Keep up the wonderful writing
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So glad you stopped by to read. Thank you for the lovely comment. I am glad it made you smile and think of Josh. Hugs,
Love Mom,
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A good take on how life can give to a nother
So enjoyed this write...mac
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Hugs my friend. *hug*
Thank you for reading dear friend. Always, Sandy
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The prompt grabs the reader as images flow to led through falling rain. Lovely mephor for love connected with nature as blooms open to greet passions desire. Moistened love tempts arms in afterglow. I love the flow as gentle movement join embraced moments to satisify
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Hello Dan
How is my dear friend? So nice to have you stop by. I do appreciate your wonderful comment. Hugs and smiles. Bless You and yours, Sandy
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I feel like I've just entered a romance story! The hint of comparing nature with intimacy shows through in a beautful way.
I wish I had just alittle of the talent you have for expressing such beauty!
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Lovely Comment
Hello, Thank you for the nice comment. It is so appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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How beautifully you write of love. Romantic and sensual that makes you sigh when you finish reading and you think "if only". Sheila
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Thank you Shelia
Always a pleasure to have you stop by. You take care. Hugs and Smiles, Sandy
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