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The Colors Of A Smile

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When darkness comes as our night

a friend brings an easel

to paint the hues upon our heart,

cerulean tints in serenity,

understanding’s warm citrus strokes,

care’s emerald stains that bath our mind hopes.

 

Claret streaks that inspire us to believe in ourselves,

lavender shades the make us feel like a rare flower,

ivory’s pure and special glow

so we know that in one person’s eyes

we will never be other than perfect and unique.

 

They all arch across our souls

as a friend’s bridge of light,

guiding us to the place

where we feel so utterly embraced.

 

Saying in words a canvas from there loyalty’s artistry,

until we can see only possibilities

among the graying dawns.

 

During those moments when our lives

become a prism of bright emotions,

how they beam upon our face,

shining in smiles.

 

Feeling so radiant in the company of one

who we see as our family

always beaming from the silver

of love’s starry presence

in our night.

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  • Denerica
    March 9, 2009

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    Once again friend, just love your writes, this is remarkable, more the words you used to describe the color. Words are profound. Blessings.


  • Stardust-luvr
    February 28, 2009
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    well done as vibrant messages of colorific hues speak messages of love, hope, and compassion in full circle sending light from within the darkness as emotions reign deep within souls radiating of love and friendship even in their darkest of times. thank you for your entry and many blessings always xxxx


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 24, 2009

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    Aww yes you don't have to be blood relation to have a family. And real friendship is to be cherished.
    This is just beautiful and I wish you all the best in the contest.
    Gaylene


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    February 23, 2009

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    Well now..aren't we creative..both in your sweetly written words and the colors enhances it nicely. Wonderful read! Good luck!


  • StarEyes
    February 23, 2009

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    Bubs, this is fantastic! What a great job! And I love how you changed the colors for this one! Fantastic!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • maralisa silver member
    February 23, 2009

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    aw wow a very beautiful poem I loved this your imagery and depth is wonderful throughout good luck in the contestmaralisa

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