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long tooth daze



life is a seam
made of glass
glue
and bourbon

the lesser parts
are merely
dreams

there is no air
in clouds
and long tooth
                      daze

living in
tarnished
  mirrors
of rust
and dust

so forget
the dreams
for
they never
      sleep












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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    February 24

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    I really like your take on the prompt.. excellent job ,.

    good luck
    kat

  • Aisades
    February 23

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    This one is like you threw a mirror down or a beautiful stained glass window that told a story.. and the pieces splintered into fragments..and we, must piece it together... you are an enigma my friend.