If I were a bird I could never fly away
'cause of weight on my heart from words i can't say.
If I were a cloud I would always pour down rain.
why give the world sunshine when it only gives me pain?
If I were a rose my petals would wilt.
my mind holds no beauty; its covered in filth.
If I were a boat i would drift out to sea,
let my waves of sorrow crash over me.
If I were a color it would be red
to show all the blood my wrists have shed.
If I were a song it would be loud and rough.
falling down so much has made me tough.
And if you were me you would pass away
Not able to deal with my life for a day.
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aww hun!
i have/feel that way.
if u need to talk im here.
GREAT poems i really like it, well written and it rymths but it expresses your selff and that's the best -
aw geez. that sucks. but nice poem....i shall right one relating to my abusive friendship....
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i love this. it really makes you think about the way things are going even in your own life. it gives you a different view on everything and makes the audiance identify with the pain. i love at the end when you remind them that they dont know how it really is. that no matter what pain they are feeling its probubly insignificant to yours. i like that message. its really sad though. but thats the way life is at times. regaurdless, i have my own issues and have had them since before i knew what the word meant. i think it makes me prepared to handle any problems. even alot of the ones you are facing ( though i dont know what they are) i am a strong person i can handle things like that and so can you. best of luck.
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WOW this is like amazing totally love it, it is so deep. you soooo have to keep writting,
argh don't even no what to say the firswt four lines hit me so deeply it is a fantastic poem
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Love this, it is a very strong and powerful write. keep writing
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This is really good. I liked the rhyme and it flows nicley, Very sad but I enjoyed it. Keep writing and I hope your ok.
Tash
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This is actually really good. I love the ideas you've come up with... don't think I could have thought of them. The rhyme flows well too.
Very emotional and sad poem but really well done =]
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