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I was young once

I once stole some candy out of a store,
oh how I was young and dumb
I realised my fault and don't do it no more
but the deed is engraved in my bum

I once asked a guy to give my friend a chance
because love is what all girls deserve
but he laughed at me then and his would-be romance
and I knew that's the last of my nerve

I once kissed a girl 'cause I thought I was gay
but I realised it's only a fluke
I love when we chat and that fun "come what may"
but beyond that I'm gone as a spook

I once loved an ex and we constantly fought
but we couldn't be rid of eachother
'cause our love made us strong when of our loss we thought
and it's that loss that we tried to smother

I was young once and somehow I guess I still am
years that passed may be used as excuse
But you realise of course that it all is a scam
in the end I'm the one with the bruise

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  • Topnotchsy
    May 18

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    Interesting piece. I like the idea here, and the stories that it offers as description offer small looks into life. Nice write.