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The Resurrection

The jaws of life have sprung music free,
Breathe, a gasp of air for hip hop and R & B,
Rock and roll, soul, and all musical expression live to see another day,
Released from its recession.

The resurrection

The revolution of music has risen with the pollution of fumes
That smoke from the souls of Holly, Valens, and Bopper's tunes
Screaming "make room!", the evolution is evident,
Evidence presented by Common, Kanye, and 50 Cent,
John Mayer and Sugar Ray, and the list goes on,
Turbulence attempts murder, but music lives on.

With jumper cables on its heart, the beat has restarted,
So for once close your ears and see the beauty of the art

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Option 4

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  • Welcome to Allpoetry

    hello gino,

    jumper cables on its heart.. very clever

    Criss
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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    February 27

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    welcome to allpoetry

    I do like your take from this, like the jumper cables. Good luck


    whisper


  • LionessK silver member
    February 25

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    Excellent job with this option. A pleasure to read your words. Thank you for sharing.
    Best of luck to you in the contest.


  • raspberry Greeters member
    February 24

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    This is a nice poem but whenever you have to use numerals in poetry, please word them, fifty instead of 50.. hope that makes sense..

    Good luck with the contest..