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Be Still My Love

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Be Still My Love
©copyright 2004 Bonita M Quesinberry


Ssssh. Be still, my love, be still.
You fight against your own will.

Quietly now, listen to your heart,
for a lie it never will impart.
Softly, too, feel the trembling within,
for it whispers of more than friend.
Calmly see the raging blaze and earthquakes
destroy,
shallow emotions played like a cheap toy.
Only a steady flame endures, can’t you see?
Be still, my love, see the friend is thee.
Tenderly feel the warm glow within,
a sensuous breeze after stormy wind.

Ssssh. Be still, my love, be still,
give in to that loving will.


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  • Stillness should be our hallmark, this poem has a most calming effect...as if it portrays the very thing of which it involves...lots of love


  • Rheea gold member
    February 27
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    a calming effect indeed.


    • BonnieQ silver member
      February 27
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      Thank you so much, Rheea, for the encouraging words about this poem, and for adding me to your Favs List. I shall be visiting your page

      Luv & hugs, BonnieQ


  • Denerica
    February 23

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    Of course I loved this write, a calming effect to keep our emotions intact, smooth, nice depiction of deer to the words. Blessings.


    • BonnieQ silver member
      February 23
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      Thank you, darling daughter! Sometimes I can wax whimsical.

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