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Beautiful Gray

The sky, painted of beautiful grey-
A moment could speak of lovely rain or
the pure bliss of snow..
either is welcomed.

A beautiful hue of sunrise or sunset
could not even break it...

Morning air, so crisp, so cool
bringing an escense of warmth.

Beautiful grey brings in fog and dew,
the fog unseen through seems so pure,
could it be true?

Oh, look a little blue shows through,
but the clouds do not give way.

A beautiful day when the sky is painted grey-
A tradgic day when the clouds dissipate.

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  • I like it. It was so melow, yet powerful in a way. It wasnt urgent, but like a drive through the country, easy going, but enjoyable 100%


  • Angels Requiem
    February 24

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    Lovely, I like this, there's not many poem I read about nature, but this is one I'll read over and over again, you're poems are short, but I think that's what makes them more powerful all the same.

    Great Piece of writing my friend.