Young and naïve
You think the relationship you’re in
Is going to last forever and always
And it’ll always be plain sailing
I once thought that
But as we turned sour
Instead of being sweet like we once were
My eyes were opened for me
It’s been a while since our relationship came to an end
And I know we won’t ever be in each other’s lives again
So here and now I’m all I’m left with is
The good and bad memories of you, and us
I remember lying in your arms
Watching a random film on TV
And how every single time I laid in your arms
The rest of the world just vanished
I recall phoning you as I walked home from school everyday
It was only a 3-4minute walk but once home
I couldn’t put the phone down
You always used to laugh at me for that
I remember when you had your diabetic fit
I don’t think I’d ever worried so much in a long time
Nagging and moaning at you to go to hospital
I cared so much more than you had any idea about
Picking up the phone
After ignoring your first call
I remember barely responding to what you were saying
And I recall the tears that fell once I put the phone back down
To this day I still remember so clearly
The day I said it was over, I was still in Australia
And we’d hardly talked, every time we did arguing
I can still remember your response, and how my heart broke.
Author notes
Option...Obv "memories of you" haha.
AP name: fake-or-real-smile
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Comments
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This is amazing! So truthful, and very emotion. I love it! Great write Bex! ((:


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WoW...I am speechless this hit me hard I love it!
thanks so much for entering




