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[fallen.]

A [slip] on the
                        floor,
From the r.e.d.d.e.n.e.d
{blood},
Is all this
                +takes+,
      To f.a.l.l.
To fall
            a*w*a*y from this
e
a
  r
  t
    h,
And
                                                  commemorate
with whatever you have !given! me.
I love this \place,\
                                                            This sacred s~h~i~t~h~o~l~e.
    This one you have              me,
                                  {given}
Before I had fallen....

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(: Is the dirty pretty good??

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