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Until Dawn


Your hot lips
Your soft touch
I'm addicted
Its like a drug
Clouding my every judgement
Its like I've thrown away my life
For this one night
My mouth clinging
My body straining
To feel your erection angainst my thigh
I was overjoyed to know I could do this to you
You kiss me to erase my pain
As you entered me
I gasped but you took the sound in your mouth
The climax is unbelievable
And we were exhasted in the end
But the night was young
And our passsion was insatiable
Until dawn came

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