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Suds

Suds on my beer
tickling my nose
delighting my taste
adding much to my fun
with friends and spouse
great way to spend the night
every saturday at my favorite pub
And if I am lucky some suds on the house.

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A contest entry

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  • jadeangyal
    February 24
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    I can always count on you for a light-hearted read. Keep it up.


  • Callisto Athena gold member
    February 24
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    Would that we were close by each other, I would buy you a sudsy one myself..

  • Rowan gold member
    February 24
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    I like the way this pours down the page too. lol.
    A very lighthearted, fun read. Thank you.


  • Parearoo
    February 24

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    Cool

    A very nicely written poem. The finishing statement really ties it all together. Overall, great job, and good luck in your contest. :-)