Suds on my beer
tickling my nose
delighting my taste
adding much to my fun
with friends and spouse
great way to spend the night
every saturday at my favorite pub
And if I am lucky some suds on the house.
In a list
A contest entry
- Word prompt-Quickie by Rowan.
875 points, ended March 9, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I can always count on you for a light-hearted read. Keep it up.
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Would that we were close by each other, I would buy you a sudsy one myself..


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I like the way this pours down the page too. lol.
A very lighthearted, fun read. Thank you.


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Cool
A very nicely written poem. The finishing statement really ties it all together. Overall, great job, and good luck in your contest. :-)


